iBT写作满分进阶

时间: 2010年09月11日 08:52    作者:国外部    来源:济南新东方学校

在正式写作中,开头部分往往需要由题目背景引出,如果没有题目背景,即导致题目的现象,而是直接说出题目,很显得非常不自然,不能符合IBT写作中的渐进性要求。所以题目背景是必须的,它的要求有两个:(1)通过现象;(2)引出话题。

 

    题目背景是鸡肋,即重要又不重要。说不重要,因为题目背景并不是在论证题目,所以ETS并不以题目背景作为评分依据;说重要,因为如果考生在作文开始的第一段就用去近10分钟的时间却只写了50个单词,可以想象后面的论证部分只有20分时间,而字数却要近300字,文章很难得高分。所以,大家需要自己强化练习在3-5mins之内,题目背景写到6080字左右。因此,考生在考试之前需要适当的积累一定的开头背景的有效句式。(在IBT的独立写作中,考生只有在开头部分的题目背景中可以有一定的套话,其他论证段落尽量不要用套话。切记!)另外,不要一味的只会用随着什么的发展这样单一的baby talk开头。

在考场上,考生用于题目背景的构思时间应该在30妙左右,思考是什么现象导致了出题人有可能出此题目。如果现象明显,建议考生用此现象引出话题,让读者带着问题继续往下读。如果现象并不明显,考生亦可通过固定句型泛泛的引出题目。

 

    思考是什么现象导致了出题人有可能出此题目。的方法一般可以有两种:1.可以通过过去和今天的的现状对比;2.可是思考自身的情况(但写的时候不要写自身情况,因为这极有可能成为考生的观点,而题目背景中不应该包括主题句)。

 

    下面我拿我自己写的4篇文章来给大家进行讲解。

 

157. In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.

In the recent years, the impact that technology has had in our daily life in general, is undeniable. It will become greater as computers will be smarter, faster and so inexpensive that virtually everyone can be able to own one. Even students can finish academic research at home by long-direction education. Therefore, when it comes to whether technology can replace totally traditional schools and bring the same help for students’ achievement, people’s notions vary from one to another.

 

146. Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Other people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.

With the gradual perfect of internet and the progressive improvement of computer, the increasing young people are keen on spending their leisure time to play computer games or surfing indoors. However, the senior citizens are favor of practicing the health by jogging or fishing outdoors. Therefore, a heated debate pertaining to whether outdoors activities or indoors activities is more beneficial to our health is under way.

 

135. Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The love for attractiveness is native to humans. Clothes are the key indictor of the progression of the culture. Not only male or female, but even adolescence or grown-up would show the high enthuiasm for personal appearances and enjoy appearing out of ordinary by the stylish clothes. However, students to wear own various dresses on campus run the opposite direction of traditional school’s disciplines and requirements. Thus, there should be a universal focus that whether students to decide what to wear to school for one’s personality or to wear school uniform for schools’ demand is beneficial.


124. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In the past decade, higher education is more and more prent. One indisputable fact is that the quality of our living has continued to change considerably on account of its popularity throughout modern history, and this trend is expected to continue into the future. There is universal awareness of education. Nevertheless, when it comes to the problem of college students’ major, people’s notions vary from one to another. Although many people assert that it is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics, I doubt whether the argument bears much analysis.

 




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