雅思范文如何从赏析到创作
2015-04-01 09:34 作者:吉林新东方 陈思佳 来源:新东方网 字号:T|T
相信资深烤鸭对于范文的了解已经鞭辟入里了,但是看着那么“简单”的范文(词汇和语法都不难),为什么自己却很难达到考官的level,下面吉林新东方的思佳老师gives you certain hints as follows:
Part 1 那些细致入微的精辟表达:
考官范文片段重现:
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(1) The obvious argument in its favor is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers.
(2) The greater flexibility of primary timetable allows a more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centered approach.
(3) Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure.
(4) They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.
(5) Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally and economically, and early exposure to language learning contributes to this.
剑9T3
(1) A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.
(2) Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either out work or our leisure time.
(3) If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening.
(4) As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.
诸如此类的表达比比皆是,无非就是“修饰修饰再修饰”,很简单的原理“adj修饰n”“adv修饰v”。想达到考官的水平,现在跟老师一起练起来吧:
例1: “发展中国家”
Step1: a developing country
Step2: a country in development
Step 3: a certain country in its present development
See the effects? Another example now: “免费教育”
Step1: free education
Step2: education without any charge
Step3: particular education without any personal charge
Now what about“提高生活质量”
Step1: to enhance the quality of life
Step 2: the enhancement of living quality
Step 3: the great enhancement of individuals’ living quality
Now it’s your turn:
练习1: 满足人们的需求
Step1:
Step2:
Step3:
练习2: 改善健康水平
Step1:
Step2:
Step3:
练习3: 减少支出
Step1:
Step2:
Step3:
Possible version here:
练习1: great satisfaction of various requirements from the public
练习2: huge enhancement of public health level
练习3: a large-degree reduction of personal cost in education
This time, make your paragraph like this:
Free education makes room for a large-degree reduction of personal cost in education and makes individuals much more knowledgeable in various aspects, which will bring them with abilities to create wealth or fortune independently.
感谢鸭鸭的时间阅读此文,希望老师没有辜负大家的期待。“考官范文破解” 系列文章也将会陆续登录XDF,waiting for you!
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