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题目1
Some people think charity organizations should help people in great need, wherever they live. However, others think that they should concentrate on helping people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
有的人认为慈善机构应该帮助最需要帮助的人们，无论他们生活在哪里。然而，其他人认为慈善机构应该只关注自己国家的人。讨论两方观点并给出你的看法。
题目类型：双边讨论
话题类型：社会类
难度：四星（2016.8.20原题）
写作提纲：
甲方观点：
① 慈善的目标就是要帮助弱势群体，与种族背景无关，这是人道主义的体现。
The prominent aim of charitable support is to help those who deserve to be helped, regardless of their region, race or color, which can present the right sample of humanism, symbolizing the genuine moral system that human beings have upheld.
② 帮助其他国家也是帮助自己，在全球化的背景下，很多问题是跨国界的。
To assist those in need is to help the almsgivers themselves, since globalization makes nations closely bonded and much more interactive than ever before, which means that many issues originated from poor countries are cross-border and can be easily transmitted into rich countries.
③ 提供帮助的国家获得更多的全球认可和赞赏，建立积极的国家形象。
By offering international aid, countries that give a helping hand will receive more global recognition and appreciation, which definitely helps to establish a more positive and favorable public image.
乙方观点：
① 可以提供的帮助和资源是有限的，本国有很多问题亟待解决，应该优先解决。
The budget and resource that can be distributed is quite limited, while there are too many issues unsolved, which should be given the priority.
② 慈善机构的资源多数来自于本国人们的捐赠，理应回馈给本国人民。
The fund and the material resource of the charity institution mainly come from the generous donation of the public and of course the masses should enjoy the access in case of emergency.
题目2
青少年犯罪的原因和采取何种惩罚。（英文题目暂无）可参考下面题目
In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? How should these young criminals be punished?
题目类型：说明文
话题类型：犯罪类
难度：三星（高频考题）
写作提纲：
原因：
① 缺乏良好的生长环境是首要原因。（溺爱；暴力；缺乏交流）
The primary reason leading to juvenile delinquency is the lack of appropriate growth environment especially family life. (be spoilt by parents / beating and abusing / lack enough interaction)
② 商业化的大众传媒的不良影响。（内容暴力血腥，引发模仿）
Excessive exposure to mass media also should be responsible for the increase of youth crime. ( violence in films and video games / imitate out of curiosity )
惩罚措施：
① 犯罪情节恶劣且危害性大的，应该采取严厉的惩罚，比如关进监狱。
For those young lawbreakers whose crime will inevitably distress the sufferers and endanger the society, Severe punishment like putting into adult jails should be taken, embodying the justice of law and having a deterrence effect by discouraging teenagers from committing new crimes.
② 教化也是一种方式，尤其对于过失犯罪者。（法律培训课程；社区公益劳动）
Rehabilitation is probably a better answer than prison because it provides an environment that is more conductive to education, especially when taking first offenders, unintentional lawbreakers into account.
小作文
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表达变化的动词：
上升：increase/ grow/ rise/ climb/ soar/ rocket
下降：decrease/ reduce/ decline/ fall/ drop/ plummet
不变：keep/ stay/ remain/ maintain + stable/ steady/ constant
波动：fluctuate
表达变化幅度的副词：
快速地：sharply/ dramatically/ considerably/ exponentially
逐渐地：gradually /steadily/ stably/ moderately/ modestly
H缓慢地：slowly/ slightly/ marginally/ minimally/ mildly
表达变化趋势的常用句式：
例句：移动电话的通话时长从1999年的100亿分钟迅速增长到了2002年的400亿分钟。
1. 通话时长做主语
Time spent on mobile calls grew rapidly, from 10 billion in 1999 to 40 billion minutes in 2002.
2. 数量做主语
The quantity of minutes of mobile calls had a rapid growth from 10 billion in 1999 to 40 billion minutes in 2002.
3. 趋势做主语
A rapid growth was witnessed in the number of minutes of mobile calls from 10 billion in 1999 to 40 billion minutes in 2002.
4. 时间段做主语
The period of 1999-2002 witnessed a rapid growth in the number of minutes of mobile calls from 10 billion to 40 billion minutes.
5. there be句型
There was a rapid growth in the number of minutes of mobile calls from 10 billion in 1999 to 40 billion minutes in 2002.
表达占比的常用句式：
例句：1985年，石油在能源生产中占了最大比例（60%）。
1.Oil accounted for/made up/took up/constituted 60% of the energy production in 1985, which occupied the largest proportion.
2.Oil was the most dominant source from which the energy was produced in 1985, taking up 60% in 1985.
3.The energy production was made up of/ was composed of 60% of oil which was the main source in 1985.
4.The percentage of oil the most noticeable in 1985, with 60%, ranking the first.
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