7月11日雅思纸笔首考之写作详情分析

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　　阔别半年的雅思考试终于回来了，由于是疫情后的第一次考试，其风向标作用是不容忽视的。此外这次题目难度也较为适中，比较适合大家平时做练习。因此，我们在第一时间为大家奉上写作单项的解析。

　　【Task Two】

　　大作文

　　类型：生活类

　　Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　Key words: sports, society, leisure activity

　　审题关键：题目A方明确说明的是运动对社会的影响，所以需要避免阐述对个人的影响。而B方的重点在于仅仅认为运动是一项娱乐活动，关键词是“仅仅”。

　　A方

　　A方理由：

　　1. 运动可以提高国民身体素质。

　　Primarily, it can contribute to create a healthy populace, getting rid of a sedentary lifestyle.

　　2. 许多重大体育活动可以有效促进旅游业，带来经济的发展。

　　Some mega sports events also promote tourism, hence spurring economy growth.

　　B方

　　B方理由：

　　1. 并非所有人都有运动的天赋。

　　Firstly, not everyone is endowed with innate talents to become a professional and make a living directly from this kind of pastime activity.

　　2. 许多家庭把运动当作增强成员关系的一种活动而已。

　　many families see sport as their leisure time to strengthen the sense of belonging, especially for children whose parents' time is spent more to do job tasks and put less care on them.

　　【Task One】小作文

　　本次小作文为表格，在写作中需要注意：

　　首先，拿到考题以后，快速浏览题目中的文字信息，重点关注研究对象、数据类型和时间这三大要素，明确在主体段的写作中要注意数据类型的变化和时态一致问题。

　　其次，看题目中的表格图形，看图形时也要先看文字说明，包括标题、标注和单位，弄懂数据所代表的信息，而非数据本身。

　　一般情况下，表格图中的文字说明比较容易识的，就如同曲线图中的横纵轴一样。上图中横向代表不同的时间，纵向则代表不同的地区。但是通常表格的最后一列和最后一行要特别注意，有可能是数据的叠加、平均或者对比。然后，筛选信息，圈关键数据。表格图写作不是记流水帐，需要面面俱到，但是关键数据可是一个都不能少的。核心数据通常包括总数、极值、突变值等等。

　　本次原题还未出现，类似题目大家可参考C10T2：

　　You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

　　The tables below give information about sales of Faritrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

　　Write at least 150 words.

　　Sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas (1999 & 2004)

　　Coffee

　　1999

　　(millions of euros)

　　2004

　　(millions of euros)

　　1.5

　　Switzerland

　　Denmark

　　1.8

　　Belgium

　　1.7

　　Sweden

　　0.8

　　Bananas

　　1999

　　(millions of euros)

　　2004

　　(millions of euros)

　　Switzerland

　　5.5

　　Belgium

　　0.6

　　Sweden

　　1.8

　　Denmark

　　0.9

　　参考例文：

　　The two tables contain sales data for Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004, in five nations of Europe.

　　The first table shows low-level coffee sales in increasing in all five countries, albeit to widely varying degrees. In two places sales increased by the same small amount: 1.8 – 2 million euros in Denmark, and 0.8-1 million in Sweden. The increment was slightly larger in Belgium, from 1-1.7 million euros. Meanwhile, in Switzerland sales doubled from 3-6 million euros. Finally, in the UK there was an enormous increase, from 1.5-20 million euros.

　　In the second table, it is Switzerland which stands out as buying far more Fairtrade bananas than the other four countries. Swiss sales figures jumped for 15-47 million euros across these five years, while in the UK and Belgium sales only grew from 1-5.5 and from 0.6-4 million euros respectively. Sweden and Denmark showed a different pattern, with falls in banana sales from 1.8-1 and 2-0.9 million euros.

　　Comparing the two tables, it is clear that in 1999 Fairtrade coffee sales ranged from 0.8-3 million euros in these five countries , while banana sales also mostly clustered between 0.6-2 million euros, with Switzerland the outlier at a huge 15 million euros. By 20044, sales figures for both products had risen across the board, except for Swede and Denmark which recorded drops in banana sales.

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