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GMAT作文 开pizza和golf club

2015-01-23 17:14  作者:  来源:新东方网整理  字号:T|T

又到了GMAT考试作文机经的放送时间,正在备考GMAT作文的同学要掌握一下最新的机经。机经在我们的复习准备中占有非常重要的地位,所以考生们复习GMAT写作的时候要重点关注一下。下面是小编的分享。

有个调查说在Park Hill区有家theater,一家pizza店和一家golf club很火,于是一家投资公司的一个智商捉急的小朋友就向他们老板说:我们可以在Irongate区也投资一家Playhouse,一家pizza店和一家golf club。而且为了招揽顾客并maximize our return,我们可以让第三家店给去过其余两家店的顾客打折。

The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm:

“Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’- Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each and maximize our return.”

参考思路

1、 错误类比,

First of all, the success of the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club in the Park Hill district does not guarantee the success of the Roxy Playhouse,

2、 过去两年推将来

Secondly, the fact that three businesses in the Park Hill district have all had business increases within the past two years does not warrant they will continue to be profitable in the coming year.

3、 无关假设

Finally, the author unfairly assumes that customers will take equal interest in the three different new business, but the consumers may patronize(惠顾)only one or two of the new business.

按lawyer的总结,如果要加强因果型结论,则可以使用:A。没有其他原因或可能导致该结果。B。结合因果:或有因有果或无果无因。C。因果不颠倒了。D(显示因果关系的)资料是准确。

上述就是小编分享的GMAT作文机经,想拿到GMAT作文高分是不能离开机经的。所以上述的GMAT写作机经考生们要认真对待,复习利用好我们的资料。

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