巧用连接词,擦亮你的英语作文
一篇好的书面表达,应该行文连贯流畅,具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词,能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑,使文章更为地道,更具“英语味”,档次也就更高了。那么我们来看看怎样巧用连接词:
一、 使用连接词拓展句子
不少同学在写作时会感觉到无话可说,表达内容过于简单且又不够清楚。使用连接词可以帮助我们打开思路,拓展我们所要表达的句子,使内容更清晰、更充实。
例1:我喜欢运动。
一般表达:I like sports.
较好表达:I like sports, especially swimming and playing basketball.
例2:杰克擅长英语。
一般表达:Jack is good at English.
较好表达:Jack is good at English. For example, he can talk with foreigners in English freely.
二、使用连接词进行过渡
除了拓展句子以外,连接词作为插入语最主要的作用是展现句子之间和段落之间的内在逻辑关系,对上下文进行连接,承上启下,前后呼应,使行文连贯,体现作者清晰的思路和条理。
例:我们的班长是个好女孩。她学习努力,各门功课优秀。她喜欢体育运动,积极参
加学校的运动会。她还乐于助人。她给我们树立了好榜样。
一般表达:
Our monitor is a good girl. She studies very hard. She is good at all the subjects. She likes sports. She takes an active part in the school sports meetings. She is always ready to help others. She has set us a good example.
加上连接词的表达:
As you know, our monitor is a good girl. She studies very hard so that she is good at all the subjects. What’s more, she likes sports. She takes an active part in the school sports meetings. In addition, she is always ready to help others. In a word, she has set us a good example.
三、连接词的分类和运用
1. 表并列或选择的连接词
and, both…and, as well as, as well, neither…nor, or, either…or…, not only…but also…等。
例句展示:
Ø The boy as well as his families is going to make a journey to Hawaii.
Ø Chinese proverbs are rich and they are still widely used in Chinese people’s daily life.
仿写练习
(1) 他不仅会讲英语,还会讲法语。(not only...but also...)
(2) 艾滋病的控制是中国乃至世界的一大挑战。(as well as)
(3) 今年暑假,Dr. Smith要和他的妻子女儿们一起去北京。(together with)
2. 表转折的连接词
still, but, yet, however, instead, nevertheless, in spite of, while, otherwise, on the contrary等
例句展示:
Ø She thought I was talking about her daughter, while in fact I was talking about my daughter.
Ø I did not know that then, although I learned it later.
Ø I’m not feeling very well today, otherwise I would do it myself.
仿写练习
(1) 昨天晚上,Mr. Crook没有像往常一样按时回来。相反地,他去见了几个朋友,一直待到半夜才回来。(as usual, instead)
(2) 尽管他好几次考试都没及格,他仍然不灰心。(lose heart)
(3) 他一定是误了火车,要不然他已经到这了。
3. 表因果的连接词
for, so, therefore, as a result (of), because of, due to, thanks to, for this reason等
例句展示:
Ø Good technique in medicine means less pain and fewer deaths and, therefore, it is our duty to master it.
Ø Because of the bad weather, the plane had to change its course.
Ø He was late as a result of the snow.
仿写练习
(1) 比尔因病不能参加会议。(because of)
(2) Jenny购物的时间太长了,以至于差点误了班机。(as a result of, do much shopping)
(3) 我当时不在镇上,所以我不知道它是怎么发生的。(so)
4. 表时间的连接词
at first, first,second..., firstly/to begin with, secondly..., then, next, later, meanwhile, at the same time, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, eventually, as soon as, the next time, the first time, soon, before long, after a while, immediately, at once等
例句展示:
Ø She was thinking about giving up at first, but later she changed her idea.
Ø The first time I saw her, I knew something would happen between us.
仿写练习
(1) 自那以后,他养成了另一个坏习惯。(since then)
(2) 经过两年的调查,我们对这个疾病有了更深入的认识。(after, have a better understanding of)
(3) 我一到家就发现夹克衫落在操场了。(as soon as)
5. 表空间的连接词
on the right, to the left, on one side of…, on the other side of..., at the
foot/top/end/of..., in the middle/center of..., above, under, beside等
例句展示:
Ø You can see their factory at the foot of the mountain.
Ø His house stands beside a river.
仿写练习
(1) 穿过这个森林,你可以在山脚下找到它。(at the foot of)
6. 表解释说明的连接词
like, that is (to say), in other words, such as, for example/instance, namely, actually, to tell you the truth, according to this, and so on...等
例句展示:
Ø Some of the European languages come from Latin, such as French, Italian and Spanish.
Ø In other words, experts want shortcuts to everything.
Ø To tell you the truth, I didn’t mean to do so.
仿写练习
(1) 例如,球类运动已经在世界各地传播开了。(for example)
(2) 换言之,我们要比在山区的孩子幸运得多。(in other words)
7. 表递进的连接词
what’s more/worse/better, worse still, to make things worse, besides, in addition (to), moreover, furthermore, above all, not only... but also...等
例句展示:
Ø He is lazy. What is worse, he shows no interest in his study at all.
Ø In addition, under some special conditions, you are not allowed to smoke.
仿写练习
(1) 天黑了,更糟糕的是又开始下雨了。(what is worse)
(2) 另外,他们还吃大量的水果。(in addition)
(3) 他建议我们不要过度用眼,而要多做一些户外活动。另外,还要注意拿笔的方法。(what’s more, overuse, pay attention to)
8. 表总结的连接词
in short, in brief, in a word, in general, generally speaking, all in all, as you know, in my opinion, on the whole, to sum up, as far as I know等
例句展示
Ø In a word, we should improve our service.
Ø As you know, Nanjing is well known for its historic sites and beautiful scenery.