大作文:
Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.
Why is this ?
What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?
当今社会许多年轻人更了解一些国际明星和演员,而对其本国的历史名人并不了解。
原因为何?怎样做能激发年轻人对本国历史人物的兴趣呢?
类型:说明文/报告 话题:生活+教育类
分析原因:
1. 大街小巷都在播放国际流行音乐,孩子们接触的多
People in this modern society are overwhelmed by international pop music played in nearly every single street.
2. 各类娱乐电视节目对现代国际明星的宣传
A great variety of TV shows spring up these days to publicize famous movie stars, exposing viewers to the mounting entertainment news.
3. 现在电影内容比较有趣,吸引年轻人的眼球,十分感兴趣
Young people are more willing to watch movies which bring them a enjoyable and easy experience compared with reading history textbooks.
应对措施:
1. 将历史人物的历史事迹拍成电影,吸引年轻人去看,加深对历史名人的了解
It is suggested that the story of famous people in the history can be told by movies, a way that can arouse people’s interest.
2. 开办关于历史名人的知识竞答类题目,引起学生的探索与学习的积极性
Schools and authorities can launch quiz show focusing on eminent people in history, fueling people’s enthusiasm to learn.
小作文:
The diagram below shows how different types of tea are made.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
类型:流程图
段落划分:
本题较为连贯,因此一个主体段即可。此题的主要难点在于厘清逻辑,用好连接词。与其他流程图相比,本题的动词较为明显。因此,写作时主要信息点是:
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茶叶首先经过筛选;
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之后有三种处理方式(分别使用steam,roll以及crush即可)。
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三种方式的具体过程各有不同,分别是磨成粉,以及暴露在空气中2天或者4天
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下一步都要经过干燥(dry), 之后不同的方式出来了三种不同的茶叶。
里面需要注意的几点是:
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全文用被动,因为主语是tea。
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连接词避免过于重复。
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时态应该用一般现在时。
首先:To begin with/at first/initially/in the first stage
The first stage involves…
其次:Then/next/later/after this/subsequently
Secondly/in the following stage/step
The next/following stage includes…
最后:Finally/eventually/at the last stage
The last stage contains…