大作文
题目:
Human activities have negative effects on the and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
人类活动对于动植物物种有负面影响。有些人认为关于这个问题做什么都为时已晚,而其他人相信可以采取有效的措施来改善现状。
讨论双方观点并给出你的想法。
分论点解析
A方(保护动植物为时已晚)
1. 城市化不可避免地占有了动植物栖息地
Urbanization, which has brought about the loss of natural habitats where wildlife lives, is unavoidable.
2. 过度捕猎捕捞造成的物种灭绝不可逆转
It is irreversible that numerous species have become extinct on account of over hunting and over-fishing.
3. 人类对于动植物栖息地造成的污染难以治理
The contamination caused by humans in wildlife environment is too serious to be curbed effectively.
B方(可以采取有效的措施来改善现状)
1. 建立自然保护区来繁衍濒危物种
Natural reserves are expected to be established in order to breed more endangered species.
2. 禁止对于动植物产品的非法交易
Governments are supposed to make it illegal to trade in the products of endangered flora and fauna.
3. 颁布法律惩罚对动植物栖息地有破坏的组织
Some organizations which have damaged the habitats of animals and plants should face a penalty based on relevant laws.
题目难度:中
小作文
类型:柱图
The chart below shows the number (thousands) of four kinds of students in the UK in 1990, 1998 and 2005.
思路:动态柱图首先要把数据进行合理地分类,并且描述出变化趋势。另外这道题中要注意数字后的单位是thousand。
段落划分
主体一段:
从1990年到1998年,学生数量的变化较小。大多数类型的学生的数量都有不同幅度的增加。在这两年,全日制男性学生的数量都是最多的,并且在增加。相反的是,只有非全日制男性学生的数量是减少的,所以在1998年,其数量是最少的。
主体二段:
不同的是,从1998年到2005年,学生数量的变化较大。每种类型的学生都有大幅度的增加。其中在2005年,全日制女性学生的数量超过男性,变成最多的。而全日制男性和非全日制女性数量是一样的。非全日制男性学生数量仍然是最少的。
题目难度:中
小作文动态图补充词汇
表达变化的动词:
上升:increase, rise, grow, climb
急剧上升:rocket, soar, surge
下降:decrease, decline, reduce, drop, dip, fall
急剧下降:dive, plummet, plunge
表达变化幅度的副词:
幅度较小:slowly, slightly, marginally
幅度适中:stably, steadily, gradually, moderately
幅度较大:sharply, steeply, dramatically, substantially, exponentially, enormously
表达变化趋势的常用句式:
1. 1. v. + adv. 直接描述
The number of full-time female students rose dramatically in the UK between 1998 and 2005.
2. There be 句型
There was a dramatic rise in the number of full-time female students in the UK between 1998 and 2005.
3. 时间做主语
The period from 1998 to 2005 witnessed a dramatic rise in the number of full-time female students in the UK.
1. 地点做主语
The UK experienced a dramatic rise in the number of full-time female students from 1998 to 2005.
2. 变化趋势做主语
A dramatic rise in the number of full-time female students was shown in the UK between 1998 and 2005.
表达对比的连接词:
相似地:similarly, likewise, in the same way
相反地:conversely, on the contrary, oppositely, in contrast, by contrast
表转折:however, nevertheless, nonetheless, on the other hand
作者介绍:高雅
教授科目:
雅思预备、雅思写作
教育背景:
香港教育大学硕士,教育学专业;首都师范大学学士,英文专业
教学简介:
英语专业八级,英语功底扎实。对于学生常见语法问题了解深入,能够帮助学生梳理写作逻辑,善于分析学生情况以诊断出痛点。教学极具亲和力,鼓励学生进行拓展思考,带动学生树立提高成绩的信心。
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