2015年高考英语书面五大表达话题

一、向外国朋友介绍中国春节
【书面表达】
　　假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信，字数在120个左右。首段已给出，字数不包括在内。
　　1、春节在中国人中的地位
　　2、春节前，人们……
　　3、春节期间，人们……
　　参考词汇：对联couplet 爆竹firecracker
　　
　How time flies! Four months have passed since we saw each other last time. I can’t help but miss you. You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
　　_________________
　　_________________　　
　　_________________　　
　　Your sincerely
　　Liu Hua

【参考范文】
　　How time flies! Four months have passed since we saw each other last time. I cannot help but miss you. You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
　　The Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the first lunar month, is a traditional festival celebrated by Chinese people worldwide. A few days before the festival, the houses are cleaned and the red couplets are put up on the doors of every household. They are said to frighten away the ghosts.
　　On that day, people are dressed up. Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival. People after a year’s hard work begin to relax and visit one and another. Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives. Families get together. They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show. Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.
　　Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.
　　Best wishes,
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua
【试题分析】
　　这是一篇书信书面表达文章。请仔细阅读引文，并按要求写作。对于春节，每位中国的考生都不陌生，但与春节相关的一些活动、物品名称对于大多数学生来说是很难用英语去翻译的，所以这就要求学生在平时对一些专有名词有很好的积累。在结构上要注意结构清晰及书信的书写格式，语言上要注意句子的连贯与通顺。最后也不要忘了给朋友的寄语。

【亮点说明】
　　用词的准确，比如说lunar，Firecrackers，reunion等词语可见考生平时很注意这方面的词汇积累；句子结构的复杂，比如The Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the first lunar month, is a traditional festival celebrated by Chinese people worldwide，which引导的非限制性定语从句与celebrated作后置定语体现了考生扎实的基本功。还有些比较好的短语：比如frighten away，ring out，vary from..to.，add to等。

二、李华因考试不能赴约吃晚餐，写一封致歉信

【书面表达】
假如你是李华，因为你将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试，不能赴约去你朋John家共进晚餐。请有英语写一封致歉信，要点包括：
　　感谢对方邀请；
　　2．遗憾地告诉对方你无法赴约并说明理由；
　　3．祝对方度过一段愉快的时光，并约时间联系。
　　注意：1．字数：100左右；
　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
　　3．开关和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
　　Dear John,
　
【参考范文】
One possible version：
　　Dear John,
　　Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
　　Please allow me to say sorry again.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　
【试题分析】
　　本文是一篇实用文写作，要求写一封致歉信。要点包括：1）感谢对方邀请；2）遗憾地告诉对方你无法赴约并说明理由；3）祝对方度过一段愉快的时光，并约时间联系等三方面内容。在写作时可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。此外，要注意文章使用第一人称，使用一般现在时，必要时使用将来时来说明将来的打算计划等。在语言方面，书信文体的写作要注意语言简洁明了，通俗易懂。而且为了使文章层次分明，结构清晰，要使用适当的连接词。

【亮点说明】
　　本篇书面表达开门见山提出写信的目的，解释了自己不能赴约的原因。作者使用了大量短语，如much to my regret , be occupied , feel sorry for , the chance of doing sth , drop me a line , long for , chat with ,hesitate to do , if so 。充分显示了作者词汇的丰富。此外，作者还使用了多种句式结构，固定句式有：it is possible for sb to do sth ,强调句型it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family,状语从句because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.宾语从句I hope that all of you enjoy a good time.等。
　　考点：提纲作文

三、写一篇关于“感恩”演讲比赛稿件
感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，我们将会感受到更多快乐。假如你校拟举行一次有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。要点如下：
　　1. 感恩对象（父母、老师、朋友）； 2. 为何感谢他\她； 3. 你想如何感谢他\她
　　【注意】：（1）只能选择一个感恩对象；
　　（2）可对所有要点作适当发挥；
　　（3）演讲稿中不得提及所在的学校、本人姓名和感恩对象的姓名；
　　（4）词数100-120左右，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
　　
【参考范文】
　　Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”
　　My life has been blessed with a mother who offers me her unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration. She often keeps me company, cooks tasty dinners for me and makes my room clean. Above all, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I cheer up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother.
　　Actually, all of us have someone who cares about us so much. So do not forget to show our love in return. For me, either a small talk with Mum or a cup of tea for her will make her happy.

【试题分析】
　　题目要求根据所给要点写一篇关于“感恩”的演讲稿。写作要点包括：说明要感恩的对象；感谢他的原因；打算怎样感谢他/她。注意只能选择一个对象，可以进行适当的拓展；不得提到学校、自己和感恩对象的姓名；词数在100-120之间，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点说明】
　　范文使用了固定句型It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today.；定语从句who offers me her unconditional love，who cares about us so much；让步状语从句whenever I get upset；时间状语从句until I cheer up等语法知识，使作文的写作水平得到提供；
　　范文使用了较多的高级词汇：ordinary，highly，appreciate，consideration，caring等，使作文的档次得到了提升，表达更生动；
　　范文使用了较多的短语和固定搭配：keeps me company；Above all；listens to；in return；either ...or等，充实了作文的内容；
　　范文还注意使用Above all, Actually, So, For me等衔接句子和段落，使作文显得连贯、紧凑。
　　考点：材料类作文

四、向“抄作业”说不

【书面表达】针对某些学校学生抄作业较为普遍这种现象某英语报社举办以“Say no to copying homework”为主题的征文活动，假如你是某高二学生，你打算投稿，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，文章要求包括以下要点：
　　1. 学生抄作业的原因：
　　1)上课不认真听讲，作业不会做；2)光顾着玩，没有时间写作业；
　　2. 写作业的重要性:
　　1)帮助检查我们的学习；2)帮助我们复习知识；3. 号召学生独立完成作业。
　　参考词汇：认真地：attentively ；复习：review
　　注意：1、次数100左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】
Say No to Copying Homework
　　Nowadays, copying others’ homework is quite common in some schools. There are two main reasons for this.
　　Firstly, some students spend too much time playing so that they have no time for homework. Another reason is that some don’t listen to their teachers attentively in the class so they can’t do their homework by themselves. In order to hand it in, they have no choice but to copy.
　　As we all know, homework plays an important part in our studies. It is used to check our study and help us review our lessons. If we hand in the homework copied from others, our teachers will not know what we haven’t understood.
　　So, it’s time that we said no to copying homework. Only by doing homework on our own can we really make progress in our studies.

【试题分析】
　　这是一篇书信类作文。针对某些学校学生抄作业较为普遍这种现象某英语报社举办以“Say no to copying homework”为主题的征文活动，假如你是某高二学生，你打算投稿，请根据以下要点写一篇短文， 1. 学生抄作业的原因：
　　1)上课不认真听讲，作业不会做；2)光顾着玩，没有时间写作业；
　　2. 写作业的重要性:
　　1)帮助检查我们的学习2)帮助我们复习知识3). 号召学生独立完成作业
　　需要写的内容已经给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100左右；不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】
　　1.高级词汇： attentively 注意力集中，have no choice but to copy只能抄袭.
　　2.it’s time that we said no to copying homework.这里使用了虚拟语气。
　　3.Only by doing homework on our own can we really make progress in our studies.这里用了倒装句。
　　考点：考查稿件类书面表达

五、和父母说说心里话

【书面表达】假如你叫李华，今年进入高三，学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：
　　注意: 1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。
　　2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。

【参考范文】
Dear Mom and Dad,
　　Entering Senior Three, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
　　During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my study.
　　Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contributes to my staying in a good state.
　　I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, "no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy load of studies.
　　Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.　

　Yours sincerely,
　　Li Hua

【解析】
　　本文的属于提纲类写作，要求对父母说说心里话，话题切合考生实际，与考生的生活非常贴近，考生有话可说，有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的，要求考生有较强的整合能力，在写作时充分利用连接词，高级句型和词汇，如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语，以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词，可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。

【亮点说明】
　　范文使用了很多词组：Thanks to 多亏，making remarkable progress 取得很大的进步，made up my mind to 决定，make every effort to study努力学习， the key to…的关键。还使用了不少精典句式，如： Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. 这句话使用了固定句型，I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句，I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.这句话使用了定语从句， Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。